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## What is Backstage?
-[Backstage](https://backstage.io/) is an open platform for building developer portals. Powered by a centralized service catalog, Backstage restores order to your microservices and infrastructure. So your product teams can ship high-quality code quickly — without compromising autonomy.
+[Backstage](https://backstage.io/) is an open platform for building developer portals. Powered by a centralized service catalog, Backstage restores order to your microservices and infrastructure and enables your product teams to ship high-quality code quickly — without compromising autonomy.
Backstage unifies all your infrastructure tooling, services, and documentation to create a streamlined development environment from end to end.
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@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ Powered by a centralized service catalog, Backstage restores order to your micro
[Backstage](https://backstage.io/) is an open platform for building developer
portals. Powered by a centralized service catalog, Backstage restores order to
-your microservices and infrastructure. So your product teams can ship
+your microservices and infrastructure and enables your product teams to ship
high-quality code quickly — without compromising autonomy.
Backstage unifies all your infrastructure tooling, services, and documentation
diff --git a/microsite/pages/en/index.js b/microsite/pages/en/index.js
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@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ class Index extends React.Component {
Powered by a centralized service catalog, Backstage restores
- order to your infrastructure. So your product teams can ship
+ order to your infrastructure and enables your product teams to ship
high-quality code quickly — without compromising autonomy.