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@@ -7,14 +7,11 @@ owners:
   - '@kurtaking'
 project-areas:
   - backend
+  - core
   - framework
 creation-date: 2025-06-23
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 # BEP: Backstage Telemetry Service
 
 - [Summary](#summary)
@@ -33,10 +30,12 @@ Add a core telemetry service to Backstage's backend system that provides a unifi
 
 ## Motivation
 
-While individual plugins may implement their own metrics or tracing, there's no unified service that provides a standardized approach for telemetry and observability. This gap makes it difficult for operators to monitor Backstage deployments effectively and for plugin developers to add observability to their plugins consistently.
+There is currently no guidance for plugin authors when it comes to telemetry and while individual plugins may implement their own metrics or tracing, there's no unified service that provides a standardized approach for telemetry and observability. This gap makes it difficult for operators to monitor Backstage deployments effectively and for plugin developers to add observability to their plugins consistently.
 
 ### Goals
 
+Provide a unified service that provides a standardized approach for telemetry where setup docs like [these](https://backstage.io/docs/tutorials/setup-opentelemetry/) are not needed.
+
 - Consistent telemetry patterns across all plugins
 - Zero-configuration defaults that work out of the box
 - Extensible architecture for custom telemetry backends
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 ### Non-Goals
 
+- We will not backfill missing telemetry for existing plugins.
+- We will not recreate the OTEL Node SDK
+
 ## Proposal
 
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+Following similar patterns to other core services, we will create a new `RootTelemetryService` responsible for initializing telemetry and app-wide concerns, and the creation of plugin-specific telemetry services.
 
 ## Design Details
 
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+We will provide a thin wrapper around the OpenTelemetry Node SDK to provide a consistent interface while re-exporting the types from the SDK. This lets us provide a consistent telemetry interface while leveraging types and concepts already familiar to the community.
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+The decision to leverage the SDK comes from the fact that OpenTelemetry is already the fundamental abstraction for metrics and tracing.
 
 ## Release Plan
 
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+TBD
 
 ## Dependencies
 
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+- There are one-off implementations of telemetry in the wild that may conflict with the proposed service.
 
 ## Alternatives
 
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+1. Plugin authors continue to implement their own telemetry as they see fit.
+2. Adopters continue using the [setup-opentelemetry](https://backstage.io/docs/tutorials/setup-opentelemetry/) docs as a guide.